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The
challenge in academic writing is to express complex ideas simply.
Follow these guidelines to help improve your academic papers.
Don't try to adopt a learned tone your message, not your
writing style, should show your knowledge and expertise.
- Use active
verbs.
- Keep your
sentence length under control.
- Use simple
words instead of complex words.
- Avoid jargon.
- Avoid abstract
terms be as specific as you can.
- Avoid abbreviations
and acronyms.
- Avoid padding.
- Use topic
sentences.
- Link your
ideas and paragraphs.
- Use examples
to explain difficult points.
Use
active verbs
Using
active verbs is essential if you want to write with a direct authoritative
style. Instead of using the impersonal passive verbs and third
person viewpoint, you should write with strong, active verbs.
Almost
every authority on writing encourages you to use active verbs.
Heres some typical advice to authors publishing research
papers for The American Society for Testing Materials.
As
most everyone has agreed for some time now, use the third person
in a paper not only adds nothing to scientific objectivity,
it renders the paper gutless and lifeless . . . Scientists of
the 19th century such as Darwin and Huxley wrote sensibly and
clearly in the first person and turned out some very respectable
prose. Let us begin anew . . . use active verbs.
Look
at these examples:
Passive:
An improvement in quality has been made
leading to the decision being taken
to raise the standard test so a higher mark means the same success
rate being accepted. (29 words)
Active:
As quality improved, the standard test rose,
leading to a higher standard mark
to gain the same acceptable success
rate. (20 words)
Notice
the passive example sounds academic but takes an extra nine words
to say the same information. It is no more objective than the
alternative with active verbs. Although we naturally speak with
active verbs, even when discussing academic subjects, the traditional
academic writing style litters writing with unnecessary passive
verbs. Any sentence can be either active or passive. It is your
choice as the author.
Heres
another example:
Passive:
Most writers know that copying anothers work word for
word without giving the author credit is
considered plagiarism. But it is
often assumed that this practice
is considered cheating only when long paragraphs are
involved paragraphs or whole pages. An honest
paraphrase, however, is one in which the ideas of the source
are stated in the writers
own words. (59 words)
Active:
Most writers know that copying anothers work word for
word without giving the author credit is
plagiarism. But they assume this is
cheating only when they
copy long paragraphs or whole pages. An honest paraphrase,
however, is one written in the
writers own words. (44 words)
Whatever
the subject of the essay, you can write with active verbs to make
your writing style more direct, clear and forceful. If theres
one piece of advice on writing style you should follow, its
to use active verbs throughout your essays.
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